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Latest Thoughts

You may have noticed that I’ve been silent about my manuscript, Season of Betrayal.  Last word I gave out on it was a snippet of the rewritten Chapter One.  Before that I had said was dismantling it and starting all over because there were core problems with the...

More Chapter One rewrite!

As promised, here is the rest of Chapter One!   The door of the depot flew open and Irzazenhoy came rushing in. Minkhoy looked up, expecting her sister-in-law to be bringing fresh biscuits, but then she saw how pale and wide-eyed she was. Irza ran straight into...

Chapter One- another rewrite!

I don’t think I ever let you guys in on it, but I’ve been doing Camp NaNo, and now I have something to show for it!  This is yet another revision of Chapter One; let me know what you think!  (Again, I’ll probably totally rewrite this later.) Oh, and...

Chapter One- a snippet

As promised, here is a small taste of Chapter One.  Be advised that I will probably change a lot of even this tiny part here, but I hope you enjoy nonetheless.  Post your comments below!   ‘Minkhoy ran her finger over the browned map, tracing the distance...

Heads Up!

This past weekend I worked out a rough draft of chapter one.  I’ll be polishing it up this week and I’ll post a short clip of it on Friday!  So keep an eye out for it!

New Beginnings

So, I don’t know quite how to say this, but I’ve finally come to grips with the fact that my novel-in-the-works, Season of Betrayal, needs a complete rewrite.  Like, blank-page, start-over-new rewrite.  I’ve moved all my files, all the drafts, all...